Forlorn

Forlorn, a dark story of suspense ISBN: 9781978440180 Vinspire Publishing, an e-book copyright 2017 and written by Gina Detwiler.

A prologue describes the situation that results in Grace Fortune being pulled by her Guardian Angel when she is 6 years old from the flaming wreck of her family’s automobile that consumes her parents. The story begins as Grace, now sixteen and being raised by her aunt and uncle, is a student at the Buffalo Arts Academy, where although suffering from a degree of Attention Deficit Disorder, possesses a lovely voice and ability to play the piano. With her are her somewhat misfit friends that include scientifically inclined and quite pragmatic Ethan Ellerman who is there on full scholarship as a designer of video games, artistically inclined Brianna (Bree) Reynolds who at the moment points out a newcomer to the school who is every girl’s dream man, Jared Lorn with muscular build, almost white hair and strikingly blue penetrating eyes and his seeming attraction to Grace. Ethan points out that Jaren is a felon and was transferred here because he had stabbed another student with a fork at a different school. He heard that he moved from “Ohio or Oregon, something with an O anyway”. However he was said to play the guitar amazingly well. Only shortly thereafter Derick Holder, the boy with whom Jared had fought appeared at the lunch room and opened fire with an automatic weapon. Ethan is struck in the stomach and falls into Grace’s lap bleeding profusely. She calls out “Derick! Please stop! Stop shooting.” Her guardian cries out to Grace to sing a special song which he sings to her in the night when she has bad dreams from the Dark Ones seeking a way in. Her singing causes Derrick to hesitate and suddenly Jared moves as a blurred figure knocking the gun from his hand and literally throwing him against a large plate glass window with sufficient force to shatter the glass killing Derick. From this moment the tale becomes one of war between forces of good and evil including different levels of both with guardians, archangels, appearance of ‘the Risen One”, demons, fallen angels, the Nephilim, the importance of faith and the power of prayer per se and through music.

Discussion: The author has presented a most unusual fantasy that may well appeal to readers, especially YA who enjoy conflicts between good and evil forces as they vie for dominance in the living world. The trials and tribulations of the two protagonists are suspenseful as they engage in a series of activities that take them on remarkable journeys. Regrettably, from this reader’s perspective, the tale contains numerous hiccups that are difficult to accept and therefore may require a SPOILER ALERT. If, however a reader enjoys unusual suspenseful fantasy stories pitting the forces of good versus those of the ethereal dark side, obtain the book, enjoy and do NOT read further.

Two of the most difficult discrepancies for this reader to reconcile are: Much is made of the fact that Grace’s parents were completely destroyed by the fiery crash. Yet her mother suddenly appears with an entirely different scenario? Neither Grace nor her friends know much about Jared and seemingly nothing about Derrick yet Grace speaks to him by name and is uncertain when he left school when he is massacring the students?

Conclusion: A fascinating fantasy that should be of particular interest to younger readers and most especially to those of religious inclination. Regrettably and although having enjoyed many tales in the fantasy genre, this reviewer apologetically cannot reconcile the plot discrepancies mentioned.

3* 5* Fascinating fantasy for many; -2* for reasons described.

The Broadcast

The Broadcast, an e-book published, copyright and written by Liam Fialkov.

Plot: The author has provided an interesting plot that is quite closely allied with thoughts arising from Erich von Dänilien books. However as provided, little description of the plot may be set forth without a ‘spoiler alert’ for presenting too much of it and/or its component parts. Briefly however, the story centers around a series of blockbuster broadcasts that at first present photographic evidence of situations that lead to solving ‘dead case’ murders. It then switches to documentary productions of historic events that the producer states gradually will go back to zero AD. As these latter increasingly reveal graphic descriptions of well-known/accepted factors of history, mounting pressure is exerted against their production by both Christian and Muslim groups who fear revelation of various activities that may be contrary to their long held beliefs and/or teachings.

Characters: Leading characters include Jonathan and his brother Walter, who as small children had been put up for adoption when their family was killed in a car crash. Walter was fortunate in being adopted by a loving family, well-educated and became a well-known TV producer. Jonathan became the product of several foster families and was only variously educated. He was intelligent and extended his education into several areas, however. Jonathan’s wife Sarah, disowned by her family for becoming pregnant at sixteen (actually raped) was sent from St. Louis to Phoenix where she delivered a baby that was taken from her at the convent causing her endless remorse. McPherson is an award winning journalist who believed the productions by Walter were phony and set in motion an attempt to expose them. HH a former debatably crooked cop who had served time and now was a bitter, occasionally vicious PI. Michael, a young adopted boy who is hired by Walter and plays an increasing part in the story. Numerous others who play roles of varied importance. Additionally, Jonathan and Sarah’s large, heavily forested area of residence contains an unusual portion that also plays an important part in the tale as the plot advances until it gradually reaches a fitting finale.

Discussion: As described, the story begins with the TV’s Hype for the unusual clip that had come into Walter’s possession that reveals the perpetrator of a twenty-five-year-old murder, followed by similar before switching to the historical documentary productions. The method of provision is to quite constantly switch between scenes with intermediate chapters. 1 – the TV hype; 2 – a chapter describing Johnathan and Sarah; 3 -one of Sarah; 4 – the Broadcast; 5 – Johnathan; 6 – the Broadcast; 7 – Michael; 8 – the Broadcast, etc. This approach does provide important bits and pieces of the story and the interrelationship of numerous characters as they move inexorably toward the finish. Unfortunately, the format results in a large amount of repetition and/or redundancy that if removed, would greatly enhance the progression of an intriguing story. Some, more prosaic, readers may find a little difficulty in accepting some character activity and many will find character development sketchy. Some will find the ending ‘proper and emotionally satisfying’ while others may believe it to be a little too ‘pat’.

3* 4* For fascinating story; -1 at least for numerous hiccups as described.

The Prince of Manhatten

      The Prince of Manhattan an e-book assumed published, copyright and written by Alexi Iskander.

The reader is introduced to Prince Leofric, the son and heir apparent to the throne of King of Northumbria, one of the seven kingdoms existing in the northern part of Great Britain roughly in the years 600 – 900. Cedric, his father, is holding a victory dinner celebrating a huge victory over the “Howling mad Picts’ as they raided from the north and descended upon the kingdom in the early summer months. Leofric is watching his uncle Aethelred closely because he believes he will attempt to do away with his father Cedric and take over the kingdom. This is exactly what transpires when he manages to kill Cedric, place blame on the son and, with the help of Siana, the most powerful witch of the time, has him transported through time, as well as space. Leofric awakens ultimately in New York City’s Greenwich Village. Concurrently Miranda Hazelgrove, a young NYU student from Albany, has finished work at a restaurant where she works to supplement the financial support she is receiving from her parents. Deciding to take a bus rather than the subway because it is a shorter distance to manipulate her tired body, she is accosted by two killer rapists. Leofric is nearby, hears her screams and rescues her. His attire with sword and all, as well as his manner of action and speech do not cause her any unusual thoughts because there is an event taking place in the city where people are acting out their individual idiosyncrasies of thought. After expressing her thanks she discovers that he has no place to stay for the night so invites him to share her apartment. He does and from here the reader is introduced to a recounting of their activities, both individually and collectively until a finale of sorts is reached.

Discussion: The author has presented a fantasy/romance/space/time travel story that apparently a number of readers have enjoyed. Most regrettably this reader is not one of them. From this perspective the tale provides abundant physical activity but it is set forth either with little understanding of the extent of training an individual such as the prince would have received or to present him as quite incompetent, in which case it is amazing that he would have survived his life in Northumbria. Thus, much of the story seems forced. There also is abundant repetition, missed words/spelling and even usage; e.g. people do not “saddle up” to people they sidle up to them.

3* For romantic YA, Young-at-Heart or those interested, amused by era differences.

Dogs of War

Dogs of War, A novella. Amazon Kindle Edition, Copyright 2011 and written by Bradley Convissar.

Gary Lettner and Caroline, his wife of six months discover and purchase a home in a nice suburban area and in true dog-lover fashion he decides to visit a small animal shelter to get a dog. Not exactly in a manner favored by Caroline, he obtains Molly, a close to mentally beaten-down eight-year-old Dachshund. For little explained reasons other than a purported incompatibility, they divorce and he and Molly settle into an enjoyable routine until one night Molly awakens him in the middle of the night with incessant barking and a desire to be let out into the garden. From this point, the story become a tale of ghostly dogs and their insistence upon gaining Molly’s aid, with Gary in attendance, to attempt to right vicious wrongs they, and others, had suffered at the hands of cruel developers of dogs to be used in illicit dog fighting.

Discussion: The author has presented a tale describing in some detail the inhuman atrocities a certain breed of individuals will inflict upon animals to satisfy their sick minds. It is a short book that may be classified in the ghost/horror genre with a revenge theme that dog lovers no doubt will love. The pace is good, the rather detailed plot moves well so the reader feels compelled to continue to its termination. As an aside, as once owner of dachshunds, the breed is subject to the infirmities listed, but Gary’s treatment of Molly seems a little overdone especially in light of some of her described activities. But then, when one reads a ghost story, it is necessary to pretty much ignore any pragmatic thoughts.

4* Short, easy read ghost story with unusual protagonists.

People Missing in the Woods

People Missing in the Woods, an e-book published, copyright and written by Steph Young.

The author has collected the stories of a considerable number of individuals who have disappeared under strange circumstances in numerous countries throughout the world. Occasionally their bodies have been recovered after varying amounts of time after they were reported missing – and even in positions repeatedly visited by searchers. Even more strangely, some reportedly did not even provide a hint of the cause of death. Most have been in areas far removed from ‘civilization’ and many in sections referred to by local residents as ‘haunted’ or other such description such as Arizona’s Superstition Mountains and the Scottish Mores. The tales also include a number of strange encounters similar to other tales of UFO’s and strange ‘aliens’ with all, no matter in what part of the world encountered, being described with remarkably similar body and facial/head structures.

Discussion: An interesting accumulation of stories that would benefit from editing to remove repetition and perhaps provide, where available, more than just cursory autopsy findings and forensic details.

3*     4*Interesting reports; 3* for reasons described.

The Haunting

The Haunting, a paranormal romance in e-book published, copyright and written by Raymond M. Hall.

Plot: Sebastian Carmichael, one of the world’s foremost pianists apparently had recovered from a spectacular collapse during a concert. He decided he wanted nothing more than to find some way of life different than that he had been living. Thus mentally engaged, he was driving north from London along the motorway when suddenly he saw police lights flashing behind him. He looked at the speedometer and with a shock realized he was cruising along at one hundred thirty. Fortunately, one of the officers who stopped him was a classical buff and let him go with a warning. He continued and finally decided on following a teen-age hobby. His father, killed in a road accident along with his mother twenty years ago, had a construction business and the youngster had spent many hours around building sites. In fact he had expected to emulate his father until a music teacher had recognized his talent and had suggested scholarships that lead to rather rapid advancement into his elevated state as a musician of distinction. Now decided, and having reached the flat Lincolnshire fields, he pulled off at a ramp to Upper Marston. Wandering through the quaint village he noticed one with properties for sale. He entered, engaged the agent in small talk until the man obviously was ready to leave. He asked about an Inn. Was recommended to The Nags Head and offered to buy the agent dinner and share a bottle of wine deciding that he already loved the general atmosphere and wanted to continue to learn more. He needed to   expand the relaxation that rapidly was growing upon him. The evening was enjoyable and the next day, he returned to look at the properties available. He was completely tired of the years of constant planning and rigid execution required for his busy concert schedule where his life had become so completely directed, he had no time for marriage or even for real enjoyment. He even had contemplated killing himself. Now he was completely free to do what he wanted when he wanted to, he still was young and had ‘buckets of money’, so why not act impetuously? He looked at many but none that would provide anything for him to do. And he wanted to actively return to his youthful roots of building something. Finally, he saw a broken down bakery that had been deserted for years. The agent told him it had been on the market so long because it was shunned because it purportedly was haunted. Not believing in such things he bought the property and began completely gutting and rebuilding at a sizeable, but acceptable, jolt to his bank account.

The story next quickly turns to Seth Bishop, and his sons Luke and Tom, the original owners of the bakery in the 1700’s, Luke’s marriage to Bethany Abnett, a gypsy girl whom he completely adores, and their resulting fate from Cromwell’s harsh attempts to abolish all of the Roma. From this point forward, the reader repeatedly is moved intermittently among these and numerous other characters of the era and Sebastian’s activities, his willful sister Caroline, Briody, a beautiful woman under whose charm he falls completely, and more. The people of the ancient era, as well as the present, are both very good and very bad, and many often appear to be a part of the strange occurrences constantly besetting Sebastian’s newly acquired home.

Discussion: It would be distinctly a disfavor to provide further details to prospective readers of this paranormal tale peopled with quite a number of interesting characters that mostly the reader can love or hate. Further, the author has placed them in a plot that progresses at a lively, although somewhat uneven pace. (Actually the tale provides several interwoven tales.) However, paranormal devotees should enjoy the story and especially so when the final ‘fitting together’ of much of material, although probably already suspected by the reader, is not fully ‘spelled out’ until the final few pages.

4* Interestingly characterized and plotted paranormal romance.

 

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